看看老外的LED开发信 我这样的一般不看 忒长

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Q:看看老外的LED开发信
Dear Luis,

I’m writing in hopes of contacting the right person who handles marketing.
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How much does it cost you when potential customers ignore your offer because they don't hear you in today's LED marketing noise?

The ABC Lab helps manufacturers like Thornsun to get more ideal B2B customers from online marketing.
8 c6 P/ P  j% c; Y/ ?# lThis on-site seminar at your company office helps you to create opportunities and convert them into revenue.
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We help where most LED companies frequently lose business opportunities:
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, N& H# r: u0 U3 L0 N  p# G- Understanding your part why product offers are often ignored
- Getting attention to start a dialogue about your company
5 W& k5 G" ]; N# R% d8 a8 e- Building bridges with customer-centric marketing
- Communicating value to be different from competition
" N' i; p8 j% C- Y9 D# P; W- Growing trust before asking to "give you a chance"
- Improving Thornsun's image in the LED marketplace

% D) l# s& }: [3 {0 x% IIn 9 years purchasing LED products from China we received and analyzed 30,000+ marketing emails from LED manufacturers.
: r! J; A* _9 \$ E; lIf you want to outperform your competition, you have to communicate differently to stand out.
We show you how.

( c* C& W5 b/ A8 V$ a) B# }8 kLuis, if you are the right person, I look forward to talk how we can help Thornsun.
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( C6 z7 p) p0 h! J8 M0 ^Regards,
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Oliver
A:太长了，我这样的一般不看，忒长，我感觉写得一般啊。
6 C  X3 ?! i2 e! r& W* ]/ hQ:今天中午一个同事给我说的一句话，现在有些客户就像是扎金花，谁的牌大谁有底气。没有，只是看看了人家写给我的开发信
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