看看老外的LED开发信 我这样的一般不看 忒长

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Q:看看老外的LED开发信
Dear Luis,
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' F5 V+ |- K- ~1 w8 ^" DI’m writing in hopes of contacting the right person who handles marketing.
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- c# M5 A9 H4 z5 JHow much does it cost you when potential customers ignore your offer because they don't hear you in today's LED marketing noise?
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; Z, v) v1 y9 D" YThe ABC Lab helps manufacturers like Thornsun to get more ideal B2B customers from online marketing.
This on-site seminar at your company office helps you to create opportunities and convert them into revenue.
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We help where most LED companies frequently lose business opportunities:
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0 x5 }- m9 N4 g+ D; X1 V) W* \- Understanding your part why product offers are often ignored
- Getting attention to start a dialogue about your company
. {* M4 i4 |! P( q- Building bridges with customer-centric marketing
( r. C& p  O' D( O$ o- Communicating value to be different from competition
# O9 G3 r" I; I- Growing trust before asking to "give you a chance"
2 v- i# f5 {6 u% F- Improving Thornsun's image in the LED marketplace

In 9 years purchasing LED products from China we received and analyzed 30,000+ marketing emails from LED manufacturers.
If you want to outperform your competition, you have to communicate differently to stand out.
  x; }4 i( c5 TWe show you how.
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2 w) j2 O* `5 e$ l+ K2 LLuis, if you are the right person, I look forward to talk how we can help Thornsun.
& x. f, }' e' }7 q1 bIf not you, could you please put me in contact with the right person?
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Regards,
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A:太长了，我这样的一般不看，忒长，我感觉写得一般啊。
, r; F% q$ g0 U, }Q:今天中午一个同事给我说的一句话，现在有些客户就像是扎金花，谁的牌大谁有底气。没有，只是看看了人家写给我的开发信
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