看看老外的LED开发信 我这样的一般不看 忒长

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Q:看看老外的LED开发信
Dear Luis,

& v: V; x! p) t5 d5 M' _$ C1 VI’m writing in hopes of contacting the right person who handles marketing.
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; R8 l6 `  x$ J5 s. Z  P. D1 MHow much does it cost you when potential customers ignore your offer because they don't hear you in today's LED marketing noise?
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, C4 p$ A+ `" ]The ABC Lab helps manufacturers like Thornsun to get more ideal B2B customers from online marketing.
* j* s) Q) {1 |% t; {' `" A  aThis on-site seminar at your company office helps you to create opportunities and convert them into revenue.

- U( D2 u% L+ R1 `( D& jWe help where most LED companies frequently lose business opportunities:

% T  p+ Q( F' b) d: {- Understanding your part why product offers are often ignored
; I. R  ^6 A: Q+ Z5 D+ W6 X- Getting attention to start a dialogue about your company
- Building bridges with customer-centric marketing
- Communicating value to be different from competition
7 W1 J9 y! |. x2 ?1 p+ {- Growing trust before asking to "give you a chance"
7 h* J9 ]) J4 _& x4 q8 A- Improving Thornsun's image in the LED marketplace

6 z0 N  r7 Z* J$ W' KIn 9 years purchasing LED products from China we received and analyzed 30,000+ marketing emails from LED manufacturers.
6 r% |$ G7 w9 g4 l+ A. e6 y2 E& nIf you want to outperform your competition, you have to communicate differently to stand out.
We show you how.
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Luis, if you are the right person, I look forward to talk how we can help Thornsun.
If not you, could you please put me in contact with the right person?
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, S1 Y& G+ a+ x! u) D  \$ n  H& cRegards,

Oliver
A:太长了，我这样的一般不看，忒长，我感觉写得一般啊。
Q:今天中午一个同事给我说的一句话，现在有些客户就像是扎金花，谁的牌大谁有底气。没有，只是看看了人家写给我的开发信