看看老外的LED开发信 我这样的一般不看 忒长

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Q:看看老外的LED开发信
Dear Luis,

7 |! y  N+ Z# l& \2 }4 uI’m writing in hopes of contacting the right person who handles marketing.
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4 g, w- K: N, ~/ a& [; @+ AHow much does it cost you when potential customers ignore your offer because they don't hear you in today's LED marketing noise?
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The ABC Lab helps manufacturers like Thornsun to get more ideal B2B customers from online marketing.
This on-site seminar at your company office helps you to create opportunities and convert them into revenue.
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' q/ R8 ^* ], L8 P7 {We help where most LED companies frequently lose business opportunities:
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! E5 Z1 [' t$ V4 g" u/ ~- Understanding your part why product offers are often ignored
- Getting attention to start a dialogue about your company
8 X% a) p6 D6 {  q7 k8 I  g- Building bridges with customer-centric marketing
" x3 H; c4 v" O3 w- a- Communicating value to be different from competition
- Growing trust before asking to "give you a chance"
; e3 `0 G( [! ]1 C' W- Improving Thornsun's image in the LED marketplace
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/ J9 P1 |" }' X4 _' K' y6 W# x. BIn 9 years purchasing LED products from China we received and analyzed 30,000+ marketing emails from LED manufacturers.
If you want to outperform your competition, you have to communicate differently to stand out.
- K# u2 F# `; W9 m* RWe show you how.
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" [' d9 z  h+ s. B5 M+ x, Q! ALuis, if you are the right person, I look forward to talk how we can help Thornsun.
3 {9 a3 D: d) c8 F% B3 }) a; OIf not you, could you please put me in contact with the right person?

Regards,
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Oliver
A:太长了，我这样的一般不看，忒长，我感觉写得一般啊。
Q:今天中午一个同事给我说的一句话，现在有些客户就像是扎金花，谁的牌大谁有底气。没有，只是看看了人家写给我的开发信
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