看看老外的LED开发信 我这样的一般不看 忒长

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Q:看看老外的LED开发信
Dear Luis,

I’m writing in hopes of contacting the right person who handles marketing.
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' W2 b! A$ J' u! ]6 a9 dHow much does it cost you when potential customers ignore your offer because they don't hear you in today's LED marketing noise?
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$ t' [- n; @5 z3 S4 S2 ~" XThe ABC Lab helps manufacturers like Thornsun to get more ideal B2B customers from online marketing.
* o; b7 v8 z# {6 h% ^/ @This on-site seminar at your company office helps you to create opportunities and convert them into revenue.

We help where most LED companies frequently lose business opportunities:
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- Understanding your part why product offers are often ignored
8 k( _, g4 w2 Q! ?  C+ W. W- Getting attention to start a dialogue about your company
- S/ s) q/ J+ }) F% v0 y2 T- Building bridges with customer-centric marketing
1 S. u3 \1 ?& y1 b- Communicating value to be different from competition
1 L6 K3 u  P8 M% u9 |3 o- Growing trust before asking to "give you a chance"
( Y  U" ~& R8 m& w( f, Q' ^- Improving Thornsun's image in the LED marketplace

In 9 years purchasing LED products from China we received and analyzed 30,000+ marketing emails from LED manufacturers.
7 Y. u+ h- ~& z8 x  G1 y( yIf you want to outperform your competition, you have to communicate differently to stand out.
5 N, p5 j2 @/ AWe show you how.
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# Q% P7 E+ u, T' yLuis, if you are the right person, I look forward to talk how we can help Thornsun.
- V  g5 x) k, H' XIf not you, could you please put me in contact with the right person?
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Regards,

Oliver
A:太长了，我这样的一般不看，忒长，我感觉写得一般啊。
) X" E" P; e. \. `' qQ:今天中午一个同事给我说的一句话，现在有些客户就像是扎金花，谁的牌大谁有底气。没有，只是看看了人家写给我的开发信